- Write this letter to an associate, manager or a client who is soon to retire. Use a tone that will communicate well you relationship with him or her. Although most of the time, retirement is an event to celebrate and respect them, write with utmost care especially when the reader is departing under unfavorable circumstances.
- Start the letter by acknowledging the reader's retirement. If possible, congratulate him or her.
- Reminisce and tell the reader about his or her career.
- Send him or her good intentions and end the letter.
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Dear [Recipients Name],
It is strange to think of Carson's going on without you. You have been with us for longer than any of us care to think of but the time has gone quickly as well. Twenty-five years of charitable work has seen you mentor most of the employees with us today. You have helped the company grow, and its reputation is down almost solely to your drive and effort. You have though been much more than a colleague, and I consider you a friend, as do many others. Know that everyone will greatly miss you.
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cc: [Name of copy recipient] - Optional -
Sample letter to thank a retiring colleague for his service.
Further things to consider when writing thank you letters to colleagues
Thank You Letters
Thank-you letters are letters written to politely acknowledge a gift, service, compliment or an offer. Simply put, these are letters you write to express your gratitude and appreciation for someone's thoughtful actions. You can send a thank-you letter after personal events, an interview, networking events, after receiving a gift or donation, etc. A thank-you letter is always special in that it lets the recipient know that what he/she did was greatly valued and appreciated. The letter should be sent promptly and when the events are still fresh so that it can be more meaningful.
Thank-you letters should be warm, personal, and sincere. Begin with the two magical words "Thank you," and address the recipient in a way that feels most natural. Be clear about what you are thanking the person for. Let the recipient know why his/her specific gift or actions are cherished and why they are important to you. Inquire after the recipient's well-being and share some information about your life. Let him/her know that you are thinking about him/her and mention the next time you may want to meet. To wrap things up, thank the recipient again and let him/her know that you value his/her friendship.
Letters to Colleagues
Letters to colleagues are, simply, letters written to coworkers. These letters are written in a business or professional setting for different purposes. Maybe you want to thank a coworker for doing you a favor - write a thank-you letter. You want to congratulate him/her for a promotion - write a congratulation letter. Perhaps you want to apologize for doing something wrong - write an apology letter, or may be you have found a new job, and it's time to say goodbye - write a farewell letter. Although some colleagues may find writing letters a tedious process, it is a great way to maintain a strong working relationship.
Most letters to colleagues are informal. You really don't need to use all that formal jargon to people you know pretty well ? do you? Begin your letter with a warm and friendly salutation and the proper name of the recipient. Clearly state the purpose of your letter. Be specific and know exactly what you are talking about. Use clear language which the recipient can easily understand. Maintain a friendly and pleasant tone. Close the letter positively and with a note of anticipation that the recipient will take the necessary action.